Charlie era obrero. Ésta era una historia de la industria. En el principio los cerdos se ejecutaban alrededor. La fábrica era grande y llenada de mucha gente.La película mostrada cómo los trabajadores trabajaron rápidamente y difícilmente. Los trabajadores se movían alrededor muy rápidamente. Parecía que el jefe era muy malo.
Miranda: I have put this as a new posting, so it can be seen. Do the same for your in-class writing which you start this week (March 22). See my comments (click on the tab below this posting.
This is better than the previous posting. You have used the past tense here rather than present (the imperfect for the most part).However, for future postings elaborate more. You have describe some events of the movie but there is more to describe.
ReplyDeleteI also forgot to mention. The descriptions are based on the clips shown in class or embedded in this platform. You seem to describe a different video clip.
ReplyDeleteDaniel, this was the link I was told to go to. I was absent the day you came into our class. There may have been a miscommunication. I will be sure to do the next blog correctly sorry~!
ReplyDeletealso, it was a different clip from the video.
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